Monday, December 5, 2011

Assignment 4


Justin Gonzalez

The general argument made in “The Case Against College” Dale Stevens states that college is a hindrance on one’s creative side. He also think that college puts many people into debt because of the outrageous price. Dale’s belief is that college rewards students for getting a single right answer. In Steven’s opinion this form of intelligence kills students’ creative sides because they are forced to think in a single minded way. In addition to this,  in his article Dale says instead of going to college and being forced to think and solve problems one way, students’ should learn through technology such as going on the Internet or even watching TV. Learning through technology will not only help students be more creative, but also save them a great amount of money. More specifically in his article he states  ,”There are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success.” Dale Stevens also argues that not only will students be in this great amount of debt, but they also will be forced to look for jobs. Dale claims being forced to look for jobs will inhibit ones aspirations for being what they want to be. In reading his work,  I maintain that in order to be successful and well of one must be motivated and attend a university and receive a diploma. Therefore, I conclude, that college does not kill creativity and that one must be motivated and work through their financial problems and  attend a university and receive a good education.
In reflecting on this article, I truly believe that Dale is wrong. I think that you do need to go to college in order to be something successful in life. More specifically, I feel that everyone should attend a university in order to become more educated to get hired to a well-paying job in the future. For example, on many job applications they ask the potential employee what their level of education consists of , which plays a huge factor on whether or not the company choses to hire the applicant. Although Dale might object to my opinion and argue that you can learn through technological means; I maintain the view that in order to be successful and well of one must be motivated and attend a university and receive a diploma. College fosters creativity; professors are contently teaching students through new technology. For example, instead of using chalk boards, professors now use PowerPoint’s, and  homework is now submitted online instead of in class. Another example of this great technological era that we have is the use of the data bases online. Surfing through the data base to find credible info is a lot easier than looking on internet explorer. With this data base you are allowed to narrow your ideas to get the best search possible which encourages one to want to learn more about it and keep searching for more information. With these amazing databases it is easy to learn new info on what interest you. Also technology helps students be more creative with their presentation. Instead of writing a 10 page paper about a certain topic, they can now use the wonders of PowerPoint and IMovie which makes their presentations more creative. With the touch of a button students are allowed to add in cool affects which adds to their presentations. Especially with IMovie, you are allowed to add videos and songs which really exhilarates ones presentation and forces them to work hard and go outside the box. Personally for me, I love learning through PowerPoint or IMovie simply because it enhances the learning atmosphere and makes you really want to learn. The reason why most kids hate going to school and learning is because of the boring old presentation teachers give by just talking the entire time, but with PowerPoint you can make it more interesting by adding pictures and movie clips.  Therefore, I conclude that college does not kill creativity rather it encourages it through new teaching techniques.
                Learning through technology such as watching TV or looking up information on a computer are ways that Dale encourages. In the article he states “Education is undergoing a transformation, thanks to the explosion of available data online.” To rephrase this quote, he is saying students can learn the same amount of stuff that they learn in a classroom on the Internet. I partially agree with this, we now have the world at our fingertips. However, many students do not possess the motivation to teach themselves information from the internet without an authoritative figure guiding them. A lot of students instead of going online and trying to learn new things would instead just go on online for Facebook or even go out and see their friends. A problem today is that many teenagers are more worried about going out than they are with school. This shows that many kids are unmotivated and should be strongly encouraged to attend a college so that they can make something of their lives. Many of the people that I talked to who attended college said it was the greatest 4 years of their life ;not only did they grow mentally, but also socially. Many college alumni have made life long connections, which has helped them out in the future. A friend from home who I talked to about college said , “I did not go to college simply because it’s another four years of schooling.” To his surprise, he is now grateful for his education due to the fact he is now CEO of his company.
 Although there are many negatives to not go to college there are some positives; through means of technology many of the famous rappers and singers were able to display their creative side through the arts. For example, Mac computers contin prorams such as Imovie or Iband; these programs let people record their own music and create videos. These people followed their dreams and aspirations to be a singer. If it wasn’t for the current technology that we have now, they might have been forced to be something they were not. For Example an interview that I found on YouTube was of lil Wayne who started out by posting his songs on YouTube. People would go on and listen to his music then eventually he became known as one of the greatest rappers alive simply because of the technology that is available to us. Even though there are few success stories with out an education, I still feel that college is very necessary for the majority of people if they want to live a decent lifestyle.
The quote “It is not about what you know, but who you know” is well known today. In his article Steven’s iterates that people who are not education can still manage to find good jobs. In an interview he states,” Innovation in hiring is happening for both the creative and technical professions. This is not because these are subjects easily learned outside of college, rather it’s because the product of one’s labor is tangible and easy to evaluate.” To me this quote means that companies are not necessarily looking for intelligent works, but instead hard workers. Many companies today look at years and experience at the job, but it also makes your chances better when you went to school and received a degree pertaining to that field of work. In today’s world if two people are interviewing for the same position, one with a college degree the other without, the one with the degree will almost always be chosen.  This is true because spending four or more years specializing in a certain area gives you more knowledge and experience than someone who did not. I do not believe Dales view that people who are smart are not necessarily hard working; spending countless hours earning a college degree shows that one is more hardworking than someone who does not put that effort. This shows that the college educated man is a harder worker than the person who has experience and learned how to do things through other people and technology. In this same interview Stephens also states, “Résumés show where you worked, and where you went to school, but not what you can actually do.” This statement is true, but college is the root of everything. If you go to college you are basically destined to get a good job somewhere simply because your educated.  All in all, college is what determines ones future salary.
With today’s economy, an education may be hard to afford, but it is not impossible. In another interview with Dale Stephens he states “there are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success Dales point about college being expensive is true, however there are many different way to make it affordable. Today, there are multiple solutions for students; for example there are college loans. Students can take out loans and pay them off over a long period of time to keep it affordable. One way is to take out a student loan and pay as you go along through college. Another option for students is to get a part time job; I personally know this is an effective option since many of my friend’s currently are working while going to school. Three guys from my dorm are working a few hours a week in the dining hall, this is really helping them pay for their tuition. Another option is applying for scholarships; today there is a scholarship for pretty much everything. A friend of mine who is attending the university of Illinois received a scholarship simply for the fact that he is of Mexican descent. To say the least, there are endless different ways to pay off your tuition. The only potential problem I see with these solutions is that they are self-motivated. If a student is not willing to take the time to apply for a loan or find a scholarship that works for them, they’re the one who is accountable For people who want a good career and a bright future you will do the necessary things in order to succeed ;hard work now will pay off in the future.
Although I have disagreed with many of the things that Dale said in his article, the one and only thing that I agree with is that college is expensive. For me this is true due to the fact that I do not come from a wealthy background; I come from a family with no college education I have grown up watching my parents’ daily struggles, and I use this as my motivation to get a degree no matter what it takes.  In order for me to attend Buffalo, I had to obtain a scholarship, which I received for athletics. This has helped me substantially and it is making my life a lot easier at college because I really do not have to do other things in order to pay off my education. I knew from the start my door to an education was through a scholarship; and because of that I worked hard every day. Due to my background and what I have gone through to be at this university right now, I know it is possible for anyone to find a way to make a college degree possible. I am under no delusion, college is very hard to pay off however, when someone wants a better life , they will do what it takes. 
College is an institution that improves one’s life in the long-run. Dale Steven throughout his article made many valid points on why kids shouldn’t go to college such as: it kills creativity  and it cost way to much for the average American, but fails to recognize the many different things one can do in order to make college affordable. One can make college affordable through the many different scholarships that are available to us, but the ones who are going to receive the scholarships are the ones who are self- motivated and are willing to go and look online for them. But to an extent I agree with Dale on the Technology aspect. I agree with him that students should learn through technology but they should still go to college. College technology does not kills ones creative side but enhances it. Through the wonders of PowerPoint and IMovie ones presentation can be more interesting and entertaining which encourages students to want to learn more. I maintain that in order to be successful and well of on must be motivated and attend a university and receive a diploma. Therefore, I conclude, that college does not kill creativity and that one must be motivated and work through their financial problems and  attend a university and receive a good education.

Monday, November 21, 2011

assignment 4 rough draft

Justin Gonzalez

The general argument made by Dale Stephens in his work, Uncollege, is that he states college is to expensive therefore we shouldn’t go to college and learn other ways. More specifically he argues that there is no need to go to college and waste your money, you can learn through technology such as by watching tv or by going on the internet. He writes, “there are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success.” In this passage, Dale is suggesting that parents shouldn’t send their kids to college because of the outrageous price they have to pay. In conclusion, Dales belief is that college is unnecessary and you do not need it in order to get educated. In my view, Dale is wrong because you do need to go to college in order to be something successful in life. More specifically, I believe that everyone should go to college and become more educated so they can get high end jobs. For example, if you go to a job interview with a college diploma and the guy next do you doesn’t have one, 9 times out of 10 the guy who has the college diploma is the one who’s going to get the job. Although Dale might object that you can learn through technology I maintain that in order to be successful and well off in this life is that you go to college and get that diploma. Therefore, I conclude, that everyone should go to college and get that diploma. Yeah, it might be expensive in the beginning, but not when you have your diploma and are making over six figures a year.

Many people these days hate the idea of more school and Dale keeps telling everyone they can learn through technology. In Stephens article, he states “Education is undergoing a transformation, thanks to the explosion of available data online.” To sum this up, hes saying that students can learn the same amount of stuff they learn in school the internet. This is necessarily true, but how many kids are actually going to go online and try to learn new things? Many kids instead of going online and trying to learn new things will just go out and hang out with friends. Many teens these days are more worried about going out and partying than they are about school. Having kids not going to college will only make our society even dumber. The way many of the kids today learn is through going to a classroom and listening to a lecture. By going to college and paying tuition, you are forced to go to class, study, and learn new things. Also, many kids love going to college and learning new things. Many of my friends say they love going to the classrooms and learning new things because they know its going to help them in the future. Yeah, sometimes classroom lecture may get boring from time to time, but in the future it will pay off.  Dale Stephens I also believe is not every smart simply because he things kids are just going to stay in and look up some stuff on the internet. Many kids today are unmotivated about learning and need a kick in the behind to learn new things. This is where college steps in and pushes a person to work to their full potential. College has helped many of the people I know. For example, my dad’s friend was a very bright kid but was very unmotivated to do things. Eventually when he grew old enough his mom enrolled him in a college and he was pushed to get good grades and learn new things. This man eventually graduated college with a 4.o and is a CEO of a company. College is a good thing and will help push everyone to their full potential, and eventually later on in life they will succeed.

Many people these days say its not all about what you know but about who you know. Stephens goes on for a while about how people who do not go to college can get good jobs. In his interview he states,” Innovation in hiring is happening for both the creative and technical professions. This is not because these are subjects easily learned outside of college, rather it’s because the product of one’s labor is tangible and easy to evaluate.” This basically says that companies are looking for people who are hard workers but not smart. Many companies today look at years and experience at the job, but it also makes your chances better when you went to school for it. If there are two people in an interview one with a college diploma and the other without one, the manager is going to take the person with the diploma simply because he went to school for it. The person who went to college worked hard to get where hes at now. This shows that he is a harder worker than the person who has experience and learned how to do things through other people/ internet.  Also in this same interview Stephens states, “Résumés show where you worked, and where you went to school, but not what you can actually do. This is true but college is the root of everything. If you go to college you are basically destined to get a good job somewhere simply because your educated.  All in all, college is whats going to get you payed in the future.

In todays economy, its hard to afford an education, but its not impossible. In another interview with Dale Stephens he states there are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success.” This is true that college is very expensive but its not impossible to pay. There are many other things that you can do in order to pay your tuition. One way is to take out a student loan and pay as you go along through college. This is the one step that many college students take today. Another way to help pay off your college debt is by getting a job. Many students that I know who are having a hard time paying for college have jobs. Three of my friends are working in the dining hall in order to help pay for their tuition. Another way that you can help pay for college is to apply for random scholarships. One of my friends who goes to University of Illinois received a scholarship because he was Mexican. There are endless things you can do in order to pay off your tuition. The only problem with this is that you have to be motivated and get at it. If you want a good career and a bright future you will do the necessary things in order to succeed. Hard work now will pay off in the future.

Although I have disagreed with many of the things that he said in his article, the one and only thing that I agree with is that college is expensive. I agree that college is expensive especially for me because I do not come from a very wealthy family. I come from a family with a no college background and I see the day to day struggle they go through and this is a motivation for me to go to college and get a degree no matter how hard it is. In order for me to attend buffalo I needed a scholarship which I was awarded for my athletics. This has helped me substantially and it is making my life a lot easier at college because I really do not have to do other things in order to pay off my education. In order to get a college scholarship I had to work hard every day of my life because I knew that was a definite way to get into college. This shows that everyone can go to college even the people are aren’t as well off as others.  I admit college is very hard to pay off but its not impossible.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

How to do a close reading

Close reading is a useful strategy in which one dissects a passage in order to understand the full meaning of a passage. There are many ways that one can close read. One way to close read is to annotate the text. Annotating the text is the easiest way to understand a text. For example, if you find an ambiguous word, substitute it with another word and see if it changes the context of a sentence. Another way to do a close reading is to look for similarities in a sentence. Most often writers will repeat what they are saying in order to get a point across. The last and most useful way of understanding a close reading is to ask questions after the short reading. Ask questions like why and how to get a better understanding of the text. These are the same exact things i do when i read a difficult text such as a text by Emmerson. An example of this is by coming up with multiple meanings  of a confusing passage or confusing words. For example:

In Emerson’s piece of writing he said “The millions, that are us are rushing into life.” The word “rushing” has a big effect on the meaning of the sentence. One way that you can interpret the word rushing sometimes implies speeding quickly, sometimes violently to get to a certain destination. Emerson does a great job using the word “rushing” because it really personifies that kids are so anxious to reach a certain age. Many kids today are counting down the days till their grade school graduation, high school graduation, and college graduation. In addition to all the graduations, many kids are looking forward to getting their driver’s license and when they are legal to drink. In other words, when kids are fourteen they can’t wait to be sixteen and when they are sixteen they can’t wait to be twenty-one. If Emerson were to use a word like “Quickly” it would change the meaning of the sentence. If the sentence were to state “ The millions, that are around us are quickly going into life, cannot always be fed on the sere remains of foreign harvest,” you would really lose the exaggeration on how bad kids want to grow up. The use of the word “rushing” in this short sentence helps the reader realize that kids want to become older.
http://www.collegeboard.com/student/plan/boost-your-skills/189995.html
http://www.fas.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/CloseReading.html

essentalism

After a reading of a book by hooks i think i can get across what essentalism means. In the dictionary it states  esseentialism is a doctrine that certain traditional concepts, ideals, and skills are essential to society and should be taught methodically to all students, regardless of individual ability, need, etc. i think that essentaislm is basically when you group someone then associate that person with everyone. For example, you can say all drug dealers are killers. This might be true but most of the time it isn't. So when a person on the street sees a drug dealer they right away think he is a killer because hes a drug dealer. Another example of this is they see a person who kills another person. Right away that person will be associated with a drug dealer because they killed someone. Also another way to explain this is personal beliefs. A person can say not all drug dealers are killers, and another can say yes they are i saw a drug dealer kill someone so therefore they are killers and drug dealers. Most people start to group people when they see something happen themselves. Then right away they always think what they saw is true for all people. This is a bad thing to do because you can really offend people by grouping them for example: all cheerleaders are gay. This is not true because alot of the guy cheerleaders that i know are straight. But right away many people group male cheerleaders as gay because they saw one guys kiss another.

 
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the case against college

On October 20th we read an article called "The case against college" and it it states that college destroys creativity because you are required to do things a certain way and take test and so on. In the article the guy also states that a way kids can learn is through technology. I agree with this but not alot of kids are going to be willing to look online and learn new things. Many kinds today are to concerned with their facebooks and checking their wall post. Kids will not learn anything unless they are in school. Being in school is a for sure way of kids to learn new things and to do well at them. I personally wouldn't want to go to school but its the only way i can go about learning new things. If i didn't have to go to school i know i wouldn't be just looking stuff up online and trying to learn new things. i would honestly be out with my friends having a good time, playing baseball, or sleeping. School is a great thing and kids should still go. one thing that the article brings up that was quite scary was how much in debt the average college kid would be after 4 years in college. That amount of money is ridiculous. Most people will be working until their forty just to pay off their college loans. Yeah the author makes a good point about how expensive college is but you really need that degree in order to get a good job. A couple years back i had two friends one who went to college and the other who didn't. They both applied for the same position at sports authority as a manager. The one who got the degree was the one with the college degree because he went through years of hard work through college in order to be a manager whereas the other guy did absolutely nothing and expected a job as a manager. This goes to show you that people these days are looking for a college diploma.

assignment number 3

we are currently doing a writing on education and so far i really like it. The reason why i like assignment number three because we can put some of our creative side into it rather than writing about close readings and literacy events.I just got done writing my second draft with the corrections that my friends have made and its making my paper alot better. Some of the peoples stories that my friends wrote were really good and helped give me ideas that i incorporated in my paper such as a little twist.  My friends who helped me correct my story have made it a 100 times better because now there is some kind of twist at the end of it. Hopefully by the time of the final draft my story will be even better and i will get a good grade on it.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

close reading

I like this article on close reading because it helps you to better understand the text. I like the idea of having a pencil in your hand while reading becasue this helps you to take notes and underline the important things in the passage. Another idea that was intersting was finding similarites repetitions and contradictions. This helps to identify whats going on in the article.For example, if you see on word at the top of the article then you see the word keeping being repeated later on you know that word is important and may have several meanings to it. Also asking your self questions after reading the article and asking questions at the end of the article is helpful to fully comprehend things. If you start questioning why something happened then your willing to keep reading to find the answer.

In the other source i found it had the same basic steps on how to close reading, but it added a few more. It said look for the tone because it gives you a good sense of the story such as if the story is humerous, scary etc..Another thing it said to look for is texture. the texture helps to paint a mental picture so you can get an idea of whats happeneing.